Yes - the baby lie is going to come back and bite JC. Even though he was being all noble and protective. But our man does love his wife. 
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Posts: 70 (03/22/08 03:24 PM) |
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Posts: 167 (03/22/08 09:18 PM) |
You say so much in a few lines, I love reading this Cate universe. ANd my favorite phrase... "you're the fucking center of my universe"
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suese |
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Posts: 152 (03/23/08 08:27 AM) |
Thank you all so much!
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 77 (04/07/08 01:10 PM) |
Holy Sh&t!!! Justin just had to throw the baby card didn't he? He is an evil SOB! I just hope that she will understand why JC did what he did!
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Posts: 42 (04/07/08 09:01 PM) |
THanks for the updates. Justin is such a prick!
Hopefully Cate will understand why JC did what he did. |
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Posts: 158 (04/09/08 07:02 AM) Enemy #1's favorite sidekick! |
Looks like JC's got a lot of explaining to do - damn that Justin! Hopefully all that patience Cate's shown up till now with him will continue.
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 78 (04/30/08 06:14 PM) |
DAMNATION! Didn't see that one coming! Wow! How will she forgive that?
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Posts: 976 (04/30/08 09:30 PM) Enemy #1
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Oh shit. How the hell is he going to get himself out of this one? He just made what Justin did look like nothing. Oh vey!
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Posts: 44 (04/30/08 10:02 PM) |
JC, JC, JC! You in big trouble mister. Eva????? yuck. I hope Kate can be a very fogiving person.
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grisellA |
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Posts: 169 (05/01/08 10:04 AM) |
Wow!!!! that's really mess up. The last scene with Tyler was great
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grisellA |
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Posts: 170 (05/01/08 10:05 AM) |
That's totally mess up, the last scene with Tyler was perfect
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Posts: 1 (05/02/08 10:11 PM) |
I've been reading this story since it started, and I've read all of your others. I usually don't reply but with this last chapter, I had to.
I'm curious as to why you chose the route for JC to sleep with Eva? Was it just for dramatic effect? It seemed, at least to me, to come out of left field for the character you've created for this JC and as if it was purely for the shock factor and it has no real basis in anything of the story so far. |
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Posts: 155 (05/03/08 07:23 PM) |
Happily since you've read my stories prior to this one you'll recall many twists and turns in other stories that, although they might have seemed out
of place before, all the loose ends are tied up before the story concludes.
Don't be a stranger! We need readers that give feedback, too! |
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Posts: 977 (05/06/08 07:21 PM) Enemy #1
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I love the twists and turns, but I myself am a little drama queen so keep them up suese. I say the more the better.
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 80 (05/09/08 06:44 PM) |
NO - NO - NO. DON'T DO IT JC!!!!!!!!!! In this case, confession is not good for the soul!!
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Posts: 978 (05/09/08 08:46 PM) Enemy #1
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Listen to your little brother, zip those lips for now. Men, they never listen.
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grisellA |
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Posts: 171 (05/11/08 12:49 PM) |
Justin is right he's too nice for his own good. They're things that you DON'T tell
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 127 (06/01/08 04:36 PM) |
*slaps Eva across the mouth* Shut it Bitch!
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Posts: 7 (06/01/08 06:15 PM) |
joeylance2000 wrote: ^^ That right there made me want to read this latest chapter more than anything else. ROFL!!!
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Posts: 1186 (06/01/08 08:21 PM) Enemy #1
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*slaps Eva across the mouth* Shut it Bitch! 
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