Thank you for the update, but crap, my heart about broke when Jonah asked, "but what about Mommy."....and can I take that as a good sign that
Cate's monitor sped up? I sure hope so!
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Posts: 298 (03/23/09 06:59 PM) |
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Posts: 302 (03/30/09 09:48 PM) |
Ok, great update. I got teary eyed. Jonah is so brave. And glad JC is so stubborn. I hope this all works out. Thank you for the update, and please don't
keep us in suspense too long!
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Posts: 377 (03/31/09 04:36 AM) |
:thumbsup Yes, Cate breathed on her own! Loved that JC was so determined for his Cate.
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Posts: 210 (04/06/09 12:37 PM) |
You caught my breath for a moment
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Posts: 1678 (04/06/09 07:46 PM) Enemy #1
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Sorry, I haven't commented before now, been busy sending JC and Justin into the country. lol
Anyway, on to what is more important...THANK GOD Cate breathed on her own. I really thought I might have to hunt you down for a minute and I would have. 
Great job as always. Now update soon so we can see for sure she is ok and this isn't some little false hope scenario you have going on.
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Posts: 406 (05/02/09 08:32 PM) |
Nice little update. I liked the parts with JC and the baby, but then of course, I always get squishy inside with him and babies. *grumbles* Stupid Justin!
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Posts: 1730 (05/02/09 08:38 PM) Enemy #1
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Ok, this teaser...just makes me want more...NOW! Glad Cate is alright but JT is a real piece of work and hopefully he'll get his in this story. I also get
all squishy over JC and babies.
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Posts: 315 (05/02/09 09:01 PM) |
Yeah, JC and babies makes my ovaries hurt. I loved this part:
"Jonah was in full big brother mode. Handing his dad the diapers and wipes, when needed. They would "Eww" and "Yuck" together
whenever it was changing or burping time. "
What a vision! Thanks for the update....and JT needs to leave this poor family alone....but then if he did, there would be no story.......
second fave part:
"And they would laugh. They loved to laugh! Jonah would dissolve into a fit of giggles whenever JC blew farts on Cadee's belly after she was
cleaned up, but right before he finished diapering her. And then, when she was placed back into her bassinet or bouncy seat, JC would tackle Jonah and blow
farts on HIS belly! That was the most fun! "
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Posts: 1824 (06/05/09 09:00 PM) Enemy #1
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Man, Paul better not pull out the freaking sympathy card for Justin. I just know you are going to have JC tell the police what he remembers anyway. Damn him
and his morals in this story.
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Posts: 389 (06/05/09 09:58 PM) |
Yup, you know JC will tell what he remembers. He is too good a guy. Paul better behave himself or
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Posts: 213 (06/07/09 03:16 PM) |
He loves the kid is not for Justin, is for Jonah
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Posts: 477 (06/08/09 12:31 PM) |
Great chapter - smiles that Cate touched his good side. As we knew she would.
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Posts: 403 (06/08/09 06:50 PM) |
I agree. Well said.
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Posts: 1846 (06/08/09 07:44 PM) Enemy #1
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No, I don't want his good side touched yet.
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Posts: 7 (06/09/09 07:09 AM) |
Glad to see Cate's there for JC again too but I just have this gnawing feeling that something else is gonna happen ( like the story's almost over or
another calmaity is about to hit them!) - oh wait a minute, Louise is the one that keeps throwing curve balls and God knows what else at JC all the time. But
suese- you've tossed him a couple over the years too.
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Posts: 1856 (06/14/09 10:29 AM) Enemy #1
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I just realized that sue added this other part of the chapter and I'm not happy.
JC and his damn nice side and Cate and her nice side. Now I have to
go pick on JC because Sue is making hm all nice. So blame her.  Other than that excellent job as always and bring on the next chapter even if it has JC
being nice and getting Justin out of trouble. 
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Posts: 215 (06/23/09 08:37 PM) |
I like this JC who doesn't let people screw over him and HIS family!
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Posts: 444 (06/23/09 09:35 PM) |
Yup, even though Cate told him to tell what he knew, it looks like Justin still won't get off free and clear...at least I hope not. Thanks for the update!
(loved the opening... having JC wash the syrup off of himself..that made me chuckle)
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Posts: 495 (06/24/09 06:18 AM) |
Excellent update! The syrup part made me squee and I love the protective JC family man!
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Posts: 501 (07/26/09 06:52 PM) |
thank you for another great update! it will be interesting when Justin gets ouy of jail I bet! I am confused tho regardimg Cates abiliy to speak because of
these lines in the first part of chapter 40
"Oh dear Lord." Cate exclaimed. She called her husband's cellphone. "You're not going to believe this, but I can see you driving on the freeway! You're on CNN like OJ and the white Bronco." |
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