I know how your muse likes drama - but what a sweet chapter. I like normal once and awhile. This chapter made me smile. 
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Posts: 379 (04/04/09 11:57 AM) |
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Posts: 1675 (04/04/09 01:02 PM) Enemy #1
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Every now and then my muse will take a break from all that drama just so we can see the family be normal. I mean, those kids are just like their parents so you
have to show it every so often. lol
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 380 (04/04/09 08:03 PM) |
"Yeah, if I was fucking Michael Landon and this was an episode of Little House on the Fucking Prairie." JC grumbled.
That made me snort! I love this! The possibilities are endless for the city boys and their family in the country. Would love to see JC milk a cow!
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Posts: 303 (04/04/09 09:56 PM) |
Haha great updates. The family was actually being normal, (whatever that is lol). Cute banter between Justin and JC, and the kids. This will be interesting
to see how they adapt away from LA.
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brightongirl |
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Posts: 36 (04/04/09 10:58 PM) |
Nice updates. You moved JC out to the country...that made me giggle. It's going to be a very interesting ride...like always.
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Posts: 209 (04/06/09 12:27 PM) |
I almost forgot JC wanna move. We all needed a break from drama, always a pleassure to see the kids interacting with their parents.
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Posts: 508 (07/01/09 09:08 AM) |
Great update - nice mix of humor and love. Ethan certainly has become a very mature young man. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Last Edited By: joeylance2000
07/01/09 07:24 PM.
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brightongirl |
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Posts: 42 (07/01/09 11:18 AM) |
I love this chapter. It was really such a nice look at their family and the dynamics...and all the love they have for each other. Plus filled with humor and
understand. Nice job.
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Posts: 1881 (07/01/09 05:58 PM) Enemy #1
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Thanks! I think I've spent practically 152 chapters building this family and I'm pretty fond of them myself.
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 513 (07/01/09 07:13 PM) |
They are a wonderful family! I adore them!
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Posts: 3 (07/19/09 03:55 AM) |
Aww that was sweet update it's good to see them being a family.
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brightongirl |
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Posts: 45 (08/07/09 10:19 AM) |
Wow, you really had me giggling at my desk during the beginning of the story. But...I think Josh just might be right about that pouty-lipped ho...and
that's NOT good. Nice job with the update!
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 569 (08/07/09 11:15 AM) |
You still have it girl! Loved the chapter and I see that your muse was not satisfied with smooth sailing. Color me surprised!?!
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Posts: 513 (08/07/09 08:59 PM) |
Hahaha...pregnant and cranky or not, JC is so totally right about the ho, Amber. She is after Justin like crazy. Love bitchy JC protecting what is his!
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 620 (08/31/09 09:12 PM) |
So this is what you do when you should be studying? Thinking up ways to torment JC? Little Amber needs to get herself out of the picture and soon. I just hope
that she isn't offering a confused Justin a way out. JC has given up too much for that shanky chick to ruin it!!!!
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Youwishicared |
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Posts: 2029 (08/31/09 09:14 PM) Enemy #1
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Well, in my defense tormenting JC is pretty much like breathing to me now. It's a pretty natural thing.
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 621 (08/31/09 09:15 PM) |
Truer words were never spoken!
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Youwishicared |
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Posts: 2030 (08/31/09 09:55 PM) Enemy #1
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And I'm just getting started.
Poor Justin isn't going to know what hit him.
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 622 (08/31/09 10:02 PM) |
I like that idea a lot - he needs a wake-up call!
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Youwishicared |
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Posts: 2031 (08/31/09 10:12 PM) Enemy #1
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He'll get a wake up call...eventually.
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