Wow! Really I am just amazed by this chapter.
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Posts: 146 (10/08/09 08:30 PM) |
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brightongirl |
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Posts: 56 (10/09/09 08:01 AM) |
Wow, job well done. I'm tearing up right now, I really like the way you handled all of this chapter. Sad, but well done.
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Posts: 230 (10/09/09 08:05 AM) |
You write so well the emotions on this chapter, I could pratically see the emotions play in their faces and bodys, between all of them. I feel great that Sara
put Amber in her place (Jaiiiil)
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Youwishicared |
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Posts: 2059 (10/09/09 05:07 PM) Enemy #1
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Thanks everyone. This chapter was a tough one to write but I'll be honest and tell you the next one has been even harder. I hope to have it up by Monday at
the latest. I'm pretty much done with it now just a little more to go but I had to stop writing it for a bit. lol
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grisellA |
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Posts: 231 (10/09/09 05:39 PM) |
ouch...I can't imagine how hard it's gonna be
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 660 (10/09/09 07:53 PM) |
I'm thinking their children and their reactions.
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Posts: 599 (10/09/09 08:47 PM) |
I went through two kleenex's with this chapter. So sad. I now have mascara all over my face. Thank god I waited to read this at home and not a work. You
did a wonderful job with this chapter. I can only imagine what the next one will be about and how the family will take the news, and what will happen between
JC and Justin. An go Sara!
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 661 (10/09/09 10:54 PM) |
Wow - that was awesomely well-written to convey all that one goes through in a tragedy like this. Having been to more funerals than I can count - I know the
obstacles that they will have to overcome. You put on your game face and cope. Faith helps tremendously, but it still doesn't dull the pain or make it any
easier.
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brightongirl |
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Posts: 57 (10/10/09 08:15 AM) |
Well done Louise, I really like the way you took the story. Well written, great job with the emotional.
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Youwishicared |
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Posts: 2062 (10/10/09 09:56 AM) Enemy #1
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Thanks, I'm not always the greatest with the emotional stuff so it's nice to hear that it's coming off how I want it to even if that means we all
shed a tear or two. lol I have the next part already written in my mind so off to put it to paper. With any luck you'll get it Monday sometime.
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grisellA |
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Posts: 232 (10/10/09 03:17 PM) |
The interaction with the kids was the hardest for me, Emma gesture and then Ethan; they should be the key for parents to go through this ordeal. Missing Liz
and the of the 7 pack!
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drp4video |
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Posts: 600 (10/10/09 11:36 PM) |
Awe, you updated so fast..thank you. And, I know it is late at night, er early morning, but you made me cry again. Good job.
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Posts: 2063 (10/10/09 11:41 PM) Enemy #1
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And we still have a funeral to go. lol Buys everyone kleenex.
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grisellA |
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Posts: 233 (10/11/09 09:17 AM) |
Ouch...
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Posts: 603 (10/11/09 06:03 PM) |
Ok, got my Puffs. I am ready!
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Posts: 1330 (10/11/09 07:58 PM) Enemy #2 but sometimes #1 |
Definitely have the Puffs ready. Honestly, I think these last few chapters are some of the best things Louise has written recently. They're tough on her
too so I know she totally appreciates you all are getting what she's aiming for.
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Youwishicared |
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Posts: 2072 (10/12/09 05:33 PM) Enemy #1
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Aw, Kim, here is the twenty I gave you to say that.
 I really do appreciate it though so thanks again everyone.
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grisellA |
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Posts: 234 (10/26/09 06:34 PM) |
Doble ouch : ( ... Since last chapter Ive been thinking the same JC said to Justin. I couldn't forget about the decision Justin would have to make.
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 675 (10/26/09 08:16 PM) |
WOW! After the horrendous horrible day I had today, I come home to find an update. Now, don't take this wrong, but it helped me release all of the anger
and confusion which I had to deal with today. The cry was a cleansing one - thank you.
Also, JC is right that it wasn't Justin's fault, but he is wrong in blaming himself. I think back to my niece who lost her friend to meningitis when they were only seven. I told her that God needs all kinds of flowers in His heavenly garden and sometimes he takes the younger ones. Faith is a bud that will bloom in Heaven. Great job! |
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brightongirl |
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Posts: 58 (10/27/09 07:25 AM) |
Ouch. I saw this on my phone this morning and tried reading it at the traffic lights. I had to stop, I was running out of tissues.
I love them...I think they are so well matched even when they have communication break downs. It's like they fill each other's empty spots or something corny like that, but still they are a good fit. I think this chapter was really well done, very good on the back and forth dialogue. Great job. |
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