I am sure that they will be all right. I also think that Justin will come to understand that JC could never have gotten rid of their child to save himself.
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Posts: 235 (10/27/09 10:30 PM) |
Many times through their life together, I've come to think that Justin is the real martyr, today was one of those.
He has an handful of a husband!
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Posts: 59 (10/28/09 08:24 AM) |
This was well done and realistic, because Justin was pissed and had every right to be, and JC got that...but their bond and what they have built together is
what makes them stronger. Great job with the dialogue and the expression of hurt and anger. Right on the money.
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Posts: 677 (10/29/09 03:01 PM) |
Yay for Emma! Now does this mean we get a sloppy mushy lovey-dovey chapter? I hope so because we could all use one!
I want the bickering banter back!!!! |
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Posts: 2095 (10/30/09 04:03 PM) Enemy #1
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Well, um...not exactly?
 you'll have to wait until next week to find out though because I got the chapter to kim too late today for her to have time to
go over it and I've, out of the kindness of my heart, given her the weekend off from editing. I've worked her to death already this week and the pay
isn't really all that great. Something to look forward to though, or I hope anyway. 
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Posts: 60 (10/30/09 07:09 PM) |
It must suck for them that their kids are smarter than they are. Good chapter, I look forward to the bickering.
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Posts: 2097 (10/30/09 08:36 PM) Enemy #1
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I've decided that my JC/justin can be two of the most clueless people on the planet yet so perfectly matched.
I really do love this couple and I have
no clue what I will do when this story finally comes to an end. I mean, eventually I will run out of ways to continue torturing this family and putting them
back together always showing how strong their love and family really is even through the worst of times. Makes me sort of sad.
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Posts: 617 (10/31/09 09:35 PM) |
But for the time being, I am sure you have at leat 100 Ways left. lol.
Great update. Thank you. I of course, sobbed. |
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Posts: 1356 (11/01/09 10:53 AM) Enemy #2 but sometimes #1 |
I plan on editing later today. I just need to give my full attention to it and I'm running around doing all sorts of things this weekend.
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Posts: 238 (11/01/09 06:04 PM) |
I don't want to think about a time when I don't have a chapter of AAO to look forward.
Now with the chapter, great idea, to gave us a little inside in the years we missed, I'm always curious about that time, the little things that make a family a real one.
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Posts: 685 (11/01/09 09:32 PM) |
Great update. I'm not a vindictive person, but can her plane crash and she is stranded on an island for life? Nah - this is Louise and her muse we are
talking about.
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Posts: 61 (11/02/09 10:21 AM) |
Great job writing their talk, very good back and forth...even if they didn't get it all worked out at least they got it out there. Amber? How the HELL did
she get out? Great job.
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Posts: 241 (11/02/09 08:01 PM) |
Great!...more things to come, angst/drama ahead, Is it bad that I'm so happy about it?
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Posts: 686 (11/02/09 08:10 PM) |
I see you didn't take my suggestion of her plane crashing on a desert island!
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Posts: 2104 (11/02/09 09:43 PM) Enemy #1
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No, there is just not a lot of fun in crashing her plane.
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Posts: 62 (11/03/09 12:30 PM) |
I really hate Amber...great job making her so despicable. I hope they can survive it...or at least that Lizzie gets to kick some Amber ass.,=
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Posts: 627 (11/09/09 09:23 PM) |
All I can say is OYE! Amber needs to go! |
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Posts: 702 (11/24/09 06:43 AM) |
Honesty is the best policy. Unfortunately - JC and Justin haven't learned that!!!!!!! Of course, then the story would have been over many chapters ago.
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Posts: 63 (11/24/09 10:48 AM) |
I hate Amber! Ugh.
I loved their conversation, it was well written. I just really, really hope JC bands together with Justin to prove that bitch lied *smiles sweetly* |
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Posts: 639 (11/24/09 06:11 PM) |
UH OH. Things are not good back at the old homestead. Justin REALLY needs to answer his phone because they are going into town for
dinner....magazines/newspapers.....and this can't be good. Amber needs to fall down a mineshaft or something. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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