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OOPs! I better change that!! Thanks for catching that, because I sure didn't!! Geesh!
When Cate's Mom turned on the television to put on Jonah's favorite PBS show, there was the view from the helicopter of JC in the car driving on the
freeway. "MAMA, Daddy's on TV!!!!" He yelled, wildly.
"Oh dear Lord." Cate's mother exclaimed. She called her son-in-law's cellphone. "You're not going to believe this, but I can see
you driving on the freeway! You're on CNN like OJ and the white Bronco."
He was speechless. "This world has gone insane." He muttered.
As the newscasters speculated as to what JC would have to tell the Detectives on the case, Cate and her Mom found excuses to get Jonah away from the
television. JC told them to "smash the set to pieces" if they had to, but they were more ingenious than that!
"Let's make brownies!" His Grandma said to Jonah, to Cate's relief.
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07/26/09 08:20 PM.
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drp4video |
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I assumed that is what you meant, and when I originally read it when you posted that chapter, I thought maybe I read it wrong or missed something....but I
reread the first part of the chapter before I read the new post, and realized it was a typo..
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suese |
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I really appreciate that you caught that! Thanks again!
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drp4video |
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It's what I do...lol. I am used to catching things as I am still peer-editing my daughter's college (now grad school) papers.
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drp4video |
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Yay, she speaks and now all is right with the world...right? Hahah, why do I think that there will be more in store for JC and his family as this story goes
on!
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DifferentDays.y |
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I really liked that last chapter. To me, it read better than some of the previous ones. Great job!
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joeylance2000 |
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Great to see that Cate's voice returned. Not sure that I'm happy to JC had to get socked, but hey it was for his woman!
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grisellA |
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I could picture the scene in the red carpet so well, great job w/ this chapter
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joeylance2000 |
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Great chapter - love that JC is the bigger man - however I see trouble and a rat in the future.
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drp4video |
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Thank you for the new update. I am so glad that Cate has her voice back and is actively managing JC again. Jonah is quite the cutie. lol.
Johnny and Justin are so obvious. It would be so awesome if there was a reunion tour with 4 of the members....leaving out the one who has caused so much pain and grieve for JC, Cate and Jonah. But I am sure you have more drama up your sleeve! |
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GO JC!
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joeylance2000 |
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Yes - be the JC we saw last night on ABDC!
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grisellA |
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hahahahaha
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suese |
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^^Not sure if you're happy with the Chapter?!? Kind of wondering about the laughs...
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grisellA |
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Don't worry, It was because of the comment on the ABDC. About the chapter I love this JC full of courage , maybe a little too much
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suese |
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Thanks. I'm glad.
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drp4video |
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Somehow, even with the unity between JC, Chris, Joey and Lance, I still don't trust Justin. He will be up to something, I am sure. Thanks for the update.
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autumneyz |
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don't trust Justin any further than I could throw him. Thanks for the update!
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joeylance2000 |
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I wouldn't trust him as far as I could throw him either. With this cold, that wouldn't be far.
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drp4video |
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Oh no, why is A&M holding up JC's album. I hope it's not happening to him again. Don't trust JT at all. Thanks for the update and hopefully
you will updatehinthintsoon.
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