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Posts: 1375 (09/01/07 06:56 PM) Enemy #2 but sometimes #1 |
Okay, yeah, late to the table on this one as I usually only read slash.
 So, I ready all 12 chapters today in one sitting and just have say that I want more more more. Justin's plan better have been derailed a bit by Cate telling JC about the daddy thing.
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IdDoJC100Ways |
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Posts: 1375 (09/02/07 02:37 PM) Enemy #2 but sometimes #1 |
Oy vey!! Barry Weiss getting a heart?
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 715 (09/03/07 04:20 AM) |
Like she said - Barry has a "heart" NOW? Please update soon.
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Posts: 648 (09/03/07 05:24 PM) |
Loved the update. THank you. And the plot thickens!
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grisellA |
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Posts: 247 (09/03/07 09:48 PM) |
Is there a requierment in this board to authors expert in complicated twisted stories?
I think so, and I'm glad there's. |
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Youwishicared |
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Posts: 2137 (09/04/07 06:57 PM) Enemy #1
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Yes, it is a requirement that all writers be just a bit twisted.
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JCSAGT818 |
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Posts: 168 (09/05/07 12:04 PM) Enemy #1's favorite sidekick! |
Just a bit twisted???? I feel like a pretzel right now between this story and AAO.
Enjoyed the update too but sure never expected that the dirt on Barry was that he was JC's dad. I'm almost afraid to ask what's next! |
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joeylance2000 |
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Posts: 715 (09/11/07 05:53 PM) |
Wow! You are getting that twisted author vibe. You certainly have opened a big can of worms. Love that JC would have whooped Justin's ass!
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grisellA |
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Posts: 247 (09/11/07 06:15 PM) |
"Yes. Cate knows everything." She KNOWS!? how? when?
I was wondering why the descriptions of places with so much detail, the architechts and everything? |
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suese |
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Posts: 457 (09/11/07 06:22 PM) |
In previous chapters, especially the one where they confronted JIVE and won JC's release, Cate threatened JIVE with exposure because the label knew Lou was a pediphile and didn't do anything to protect anyone. (Elluding to JC being one of Lou's victims)
JC never told her, she found out in the process of preparing for the meeting with JIVE and although she wasn't sure she could actually follow through, she mentioned it and mentioned she thought that was the leverage Justin had over JIVE, as well. JC was relieved that Cate knew about it. Finally, he said, he didn't have to worry about being with someone, falling for them and wondering what they'd think if they knew. It was a huge relief. I like to describe places, especially places I've actually been to. But, no, I've never been to the Marquee. 
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grisellA |
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Posts: 247 (09/11/07 08:20 PM) |
When I readed that chapter didn't understand that fact, I knew something happened with Lou but didn't ge it. Sorry to be such a lossy reader, who can't remember important facts. That chapter was a little hard for me I don't know why, maybe my bad english, and your good redaction make collision.
It's curious your way to recreate spaces with such an detail, create an atmosphera, but could lost the reader if there's too much of these. |
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drp4video |
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Posts: 648 (09/11/07 08:43 PM) |
Loved the update. I am guessing JC's burst of truth out loud regarding Justin's paternity will be public fodder soon enough. Can't wait to see where you go from here.
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suese |
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Posts: 457 (09/13/07 05:11 AM) |
It's curious your way to recreate spaces with such an detail, create an atmosphera, but could lost the reader if there's too much of these.
I think in this instance you may be right. It was a little too much for a small scene. |
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grisellA |
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Posts: 247 (09/13/07 06:10 PM) |
Yes you're right, I was expecting something to happen about the place then the scene with Justin beggin and the Marquee wasn't mentioned anymore.
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Posts: 457 (09/15/07 08:36 AM) |
 The restaurant where JC and Cate will be holding their wedding reception in Buffalo, NY this weekend! So, I don't have to describe it!
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grisellA |
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Posts: 247 (09/15/07 03:29 PM) |
HAHAHA, I imagine you'd made a great description
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suese |
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Posts: 457 (09/22/07 02:31 PM) |
Thanks!
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grisellA |
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Posts: 247 (09/22/07 04:31 PM) |
You're so full of surprises, I think it was Justin, and boom Eva!!! I think I prefer Justin than Eva in their wedding day.
The whole conversation with the therapist was great, this doesn't sound so much like a fiction sometimes. |
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Posts: 648 (09/22/07 07:24 PM) |
Justins timing is awful..and why is Eva calling...I hope there will be an update soon hint hint.
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JCSAGT818 |
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Posts: 168 (09/24/07 06:41 AM) Enemy #1's favorite sidekick! |
What in the world could SHE want now???? Is she bored with Tony finally and looking to latch onto JC again???
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