I am glad the light bulb went on over JC and he finally got to meet his father and figure out who was responsible for setting him up and turning JIVE etc. against him! Great chapter..especially loved the sex in the studio! One of my fantasys.
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Posts: 254 (11/29/07 10:19 PM) |
"We're going to fuck ourselves unconscious every night, mama."
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Before I started on the new chapter, I reread chapter 20 and realized there were some errors. First of all when Cate says to herself Let's get back to where we were. I didn't have it in italics, so you might think she said it out loud!
And the response from JC is "I'll reserve judgement on that until the song is in the Top Ten on the Billboard charts" WELL! That made him sound pretty shallow!  I feel alittle better having corrected that, so I can continue! 
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well, JC needs to be just a little arrogant and shallow at times dang it.
Now get writing the next chapter woman.
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Posts: 168 (12/14/07 09:40 AM) Enemy #1's favorite sidekick! |
Great chapter, suese!
 A little Chasez is on the way - I love JC stories where he gets to be a Daddy. Glad to see JC was wise to Justin's nonsense and nipped it in the bud - way to go, JC! |
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I agree. I am glad JC saw through Justin. I loved the part where Jonah said he already got his christmas present, a daddy. I actually "awed". Glad to see that Cate is pregnant. While JC is already a daddy to Jonah, I love when he is a daddy to more than one....(I am hoping for a girl cuz I love when JC get's all wrapped around the little girls finger).
It is good to see that JC is accepting of his father, and that Barry's wife now knows the truth. IT will be interesting to see what happens when JC learns Justin that he knows the truth, because...yes! Thank you for the update. |
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Like she said, because...yes! Great update!!
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Posts: 460 (12/18/07 06:08 PM) |
Thanks so much for the feedback! And don't worry, I have something special up my sleeve for Justin!
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I see bad things on the horizon.
I loved when Jonah climbed in JC's lap and called him Daddy! |
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My favorite line, uttered by Jonah:
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Posts: 2161 (01/06/08 10:13 AM) Enemy #1
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ok, that was just mean to stop there. Nobody else does that in their stories on this sight so why are you?
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Oh my! Oh MY! Justin has had an ephiany! (Sp) It is about freckin' time! Nice play of tension between the characters. Interested in how this will be resolved. Good job!
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Posts: 658 (01/27/08 12:57 PM) |
OH god, I hope Cate and the baby are ok. I am glad JC kicked Justin's butt, he had it coming and more. Maybe Justin will have an epiphany and behave.....but I am guessing not. lol. Can't wait for more.
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Posts: 254 (01/27/08 04:12 PM) |
Great chapter! I feel the intensity of the situation during the meting Cate/
Justin, and then, JC rection was the best I been waiting to hear something like this fors o long (in the fiction world of course) |
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Posts: 730 (02/09/08 02:45 PM) |
Excellent chapter! I hope that all will good well for the family and that JC's decision about Cate will not come back to haunt him.
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Cate will be so pissed when she finds out he witheld that or that is my guess. Oh wait, this isn't me writing so it might not happen but suese has become quite the little angst writer herself so I'm going with she will be soooo pissed.
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I think maybe he'll be more cruched that her, and that's why she'll find out.
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Posts: 40 (02/24/08 09:46 PM) |
oohh, that Justin is such a devious little shit. I am glad that JC found out that Justin was setting him up and realizes what Justin is up too. Glad he made
it home and made his family so happy. I am still a little nervous about the lie to Cate about the other baby. Great update. Can't wait for more!
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Glad JC made it home in time and didn't let Justin worm his way into their life anymore than he did. Still that "baby" lie, I fear is going to
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